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hi Liz,
I was wondering if i can add ideas in the thesis, because i couldn’t find many arguments about physical education alone so can i introduce other arguments in the thesis that i could talk about later in the body paragraphs ?? for example: ” i agree that introducing physical education is key to tackle this problem, NEVERTHELESS, raising awareness about obesity and diet are also essential”.
thank you.

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Hi Liz
You are doing a commendable job. I always read your comments and they helped me lot to achieve 7.5 in Writing but unfortunately I lacked 0.5 in my Listening…so I will be resitting for exam.

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Liz I have a doubt about agree / disagree essay
* If the statement is to what extent do you agree or disagree…can we write a partial eassy or we have to be strictly on one side.

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Yes, you can partly agree. It’s fine.

Hello Liz,
I’ve a confusion about thesis statement. Can I write a phrase after stating my opinion (However,I also believe that) for adding more information in my thesis statement or I’ve to stick only I completely agree/disagree that ?

can idioms improve writing bands ?

I’ve only made three so far. I hope to make more later next year and at present I’m writing an ideas book for writing task 2 which should be ready in a couple of months 🙂

Hi Liz,Do I need to indent at the first line of each paragraph?

Hi Liz
Is it ok to have a balanced opinion to opinion essays or agree disagree
Can I have a partly agree opinion
Or I just need to stick at 1 side
Thank you

But why do I have to write about my work, instead of letting my work speak for itself?

Dear can we use obesity for overweight ?

It is a supporting point explaining how sports lessons in schools can filter through to family members producing a positive effect on health for both parents and children. Make sure you can see the difference between a main point which is off topic and a supporting point which explains deeper.
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Thanks liz it helps me most to solve every confusion……

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I see, maybe I deconstructed your sample in the wrong way. Once again, thanks for replying

Your comment will be appreciable.Thanks in advance.

It is possible to write a partial agreement but you need to be very careful doing it. If you turn the essay into a discussion essay with no clear position, you will get a low score. If you want training in this, my advanced writing task 2 lessons explain it all and are at 50% discount right now: