Hello everyone,can someone evaluate my essay. Thanks in advance.

The Romans were active in trade and commerce, and from the time of learning to write they needed a way to indicate numbers. The system they developed lasted many centuries, and still sees some specialized use today.

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61) So now, how many numbers do you think you can write with a oneand a zero?

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In opinion essay, do we have to discuss both the sides even if the instruction doesn’t mention about the same (generally instruction will be like – discuss both the sides).
Considering the above example, in which the instruction is mentioned as “To what extent do you agree ?”, the model answer discussed both the sides.

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I practiced this essay and faced some conflicts. So I partially agree and wanted to present a balanced view, however in writing I had a lot of points, for both positives and negatives in mind and considering word limit, I was not able to elaborate properly.

You must have a clear position – you can’t sit on the fence for an opinion essay.

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You can agree or you can disagree or you can partially agree (this means you present a specific opinion, often called a balanced view but it doesn’t mean a discussion essay). No student should try a partial agreement unless they have been trained how to do it.

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hi Liz,
i have a question or you can say confusion specifically related to this model essay. you see question asked about how far you agree with the topic, in my opinion before reading the model answer most of us including me would have chosen a side either agree or disagree. but now my question is you’re partially supporting that’s individual benefits at the same time you’re also talking about negative impacts on society. so in this situation i’m not sure how to do this agree and disagree for the same topic… could we have gone the other way around like conventional way of choosing one side?

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For the above essay, isn’t the word community unfit here. We have to talk about society. Aren’t we deviating from the topic?
Please elaborate so that I can have a clear understanding.

I loved your essay ! Your writing skills are commendable I think it is a band 8 task !

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This is an opinion essay which means IELTS are asking you to choose a position and explain it. Don’t turn this into a discussion essay by doing both sides. You need to state clearly:
Do you think it is positive or negative for individuals?
Do you think it is positive or negative for society?
In my model essay, I said it was positive for individuals but negative for society. Always make your opinion directly and give a clear position.

Your essay will show a range of relevant tenses to show your flexibility and range in grammar.

Please if someone can tell me their opinion on this essay

Hi liz,
I just wondering for agree and disagree instruction, so is it okay if we agree in half case and disagree in other case, for example your essay. I read from other’s website, we should choose only one, agree or disagree. Thank you

In listening, it would be counted as one word and one number. In writing, it is two words.

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If you have an extreme view, you use strong language. In opinion essays or any essay that requires you to present a view, you choose how to phrase your ideas.
Liz